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Kiba is the one that has a trusty and solid relationship with his dog, Akamaru. He is also the only gennin to pass the Chuunin exam. During his battle with Sakura and Chiyo, Sasori boasts that he and his army of 100 puppets were powerful enough to conquer an entire nation.However, he was not powerful enough to survive against his grandmother, as her ten puppets were able to overcome his army of puppets.Easily the greatest Naruto story I've ever read, except perhaps Viridian's story Team 8.Although to be fair, it has the advantage of being around long and thus having more chapters.We all hit the deck, while Kakashi wouldn't if the shit hit the fan sound better instead of if the fir hit the shan? "if the fit had hit the shan" it took me a good two seconds to understand what you meant, here, but it made me smile! " I'm astonished that Kakashi was surprised Naruto had a torture jutsu, but wasn't by Anko's answer to this question! Do you intend to pair them, or will Hinata wake up? "and I’ve just realised that I was scammed this morning." I don't think so! (just a try to guess how much Naruto will hurt the culprits) "Shino whistled softly." I agree! And I am assuming tha the assasination plot has been taken care of with prejudice?You should eventaully tell people who you have in mind as naruto's love interests. ;-p I did wonder for a time on why Naruto addressed to Haku as female, until I realized that he did that consistently when recalling the story, so I thought he had something planed (I'm happy I can still guess right ;-p) "Sasuke, Haku’s a guy. I wonder why the Hyūga’s were so happy to sort and count Naruto's riches. "I like women who don’t play stupid games..." Forget my comment about the pairings... After all, what are Super Narutos for but to be super protective, awesome when angry Narutos?One tiny little correction I notice that slipped by the proofreading, though.When Eleven is talking about Naruto's thought processes, his comment includes, "just because the root he takes is as straight as a corkscrew", and I'm pretty sure that it should have been "just because the route he takes is as straight as a corkscrew".
Your story is just so incredible and everything is so well done, I'm not quite sure what to say, but I've tried, and hopefully that's what counts. Hope it comes out before October, but if not oh, well. This Naruto seems to dig kunoichi who take their career seriously, so how is he going to react to Temari? He was then sent to kill Idate, but was killed by Naruto with his move Rasengan. Dear Diary, I just figured out today that my name means fish cake. Wow that's really dumb; I mean why would anybody's name be fish cake? Anyway, keep up the great work, and I'm looking forward to the next installment. I keep getting moments where I laugh my ass of only to look at parts and shake my head in dismay.(especially if I have a duh moment when naruto calls the Jonin Samurai) to keep in style, I bow to you in respect and till next time!
It's clearly still Naruto, but he's matured just the way one would expect him too, if he was hanging out with adults.